Assignment:
We have to show and work on our comic strip of one person traveling, one person waiting and the package for the other. Also had to find an example of a comic we liked online.
Craft:
My story is eleven frames long. It was determined by the group that I need to add more detail to the background on three scenes and to change the title scene. The colors I used were red,(female present) yellow,(male's present) and green( for the background). I found they stood out the best and worked for my story.
Composition:
Everyone understood my story. It flowed nicely. I do agree with needing more detail on the three scene's. I liked my coloring but the audience wants more tonal change so I will have to add that also.
Concept:
The concept was to try and add the details to the story that were missing from my rough draft. I believe I succeeded in that. Everyone understood what was going on and why I choose the colors I did for the story. I am going to take the groups advice and follow through on adding more detail and tonal changes in color.
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